I started on my new project which is bringing life. I started on my new project which is bringing life. I started studying dead bodies and to make life i needed to learn death, the months past and i am still working secretly in my laboratory in the roof of my home. I became ill and never wrote back to my sister or father i was so busy with my project i didn't sleep or eat my main focus to bring life. i went to the hospital and got dead body parts and i wanted to make a large human because its easier to work on after two years my work was it opened it eyes ... it was ugly and scary, he had rough black hair and yellow dry skin my dreams came down crashing this was not what i wanted .... i ran away from home i was scared from him and ill. i went to hotel and suddenly i see henry my best friend i was so happy to see him and i asked him about my family he told me they are all fine but worried about you so he told me that he will come to study at the university with me i was so happy so we went back home, and i wished i didn't see the monster i went slowly up stairs and i didn't see the monster so me and henry we had breakfast and i imagined the monster and fainted. and then henry took care of me for many months after that i was better and we started going to the university and i hated science from that moment and didn't like to study it again and henry said he wanted to study languages so i told him i will study it with you and i was so happy with him and wished i never see the monster face again ,,, etly in my laboratory in the roof of my home. I became ill and never wrote back to my sister or father i was so busy with my project i didn't sleep or eat my main focus to bring life. i went to the hospital and got dead body parts and i wanted to make a large human because its easier to work on after two years my work was it opened it eyes ... it was ugly and scary, he had rough black hair and yellow dry skin my dreams came down crashing this was not what i wanted .... i ran away from home i was scared from him and ill. i went to hotel and suddenly i see henry my best friend i was so happy to see him and i asked him about my family he told me they are all fine but worried about you so he told me that he will come to study at the university with me i was so happy so we went back home, and i wished i didn't see the monster i went slowly up stairs and i didn't see the monster so me and henry we had breakfast and i imagined the monster and fainted. and then henry took care of me for many months after that i was better and we started going to the university and i hated science from that moment and didn't like to study it again and henry said he wanted to study languages so i told him i will study it with you and i was so happy with him and wished i never see the monster face again ,,,
Well-detailed post! I like the perspective you've taken, but make sure you layer in plenty of what you think would be the doctor's personal opinions. This will take your posts beyond what has happened in the story and give us your personal interpretation of those events as if it were you who is doing all of this. Also, don't forget to use capital letters for personal pronoun "I" and in the first letter of all names. Thank you!
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